Ovaltine Malt Beverage Mix 1200g

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product information:

AttributeValue
is_discontinued_by_manufacturer‎No
package_dimensions‎6.97 x 6.14 x 6.1 inches; 2.65 Pounds
upc‎810793010014
manufacturer‎Ovaltine
best_sellers_rank#18,117 in Grocery & Gourmet Food (See Top 100 in Grocery & Gourmet Food)
#25 in Powdered Chocolate Drink Mixes
customer_reviews
ratings_count1
stars4.2
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