Ovaltine Malt Beverage Mix 1200g
Category: ovomaltine of switzerland
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product information:
| Attribute | Value | ||||
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| is_discontinued_by_manufacturer | No | ||||
| package_dimensions | 6.97 x 6.14 x 6.1 inches; 2.65 Pounds | ||||
| upc | 810793010014 | ||||
| manufacturer | Ovaltine | ||||
| best_sellers_rank | #18,117 in Grocery & Gourmet Food (See Top 100 in Grocery & Gourmet Food) #25 in Powdered Chocolate Drink Mixes | ||||
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